Statementory Avis 

Interesting and helpful feedback. This was quick and detailed.

It really helped me to develop my ideas and structure of my UCAS personal statement.

The review was very helpful as it gave me clear breakdowns and allowed me to see where i would be best placed, and gave me before and afters

I was given helpful, constructive criticism with examples on how to make it better, including theories and acts of legislation. It was very helpful in improving my writing.

Fantastic insight into what I needed to do next in my personal statement. Really helped after I felt like I had hit a wall in my writing and had no idea where to go next. Would recommend.

I finaly realised what I miss in my personalt statement. Now I found the direction to develop. Try it and you wont regret it.

The report was very detailed. Telling me what exactly is good about my essay but more importantly what I need to improve. Its layout was clear with relevant, useful headings and the summary at the end was particularly helpful. One thing that made it stand out was how it didn’t just point out where I wrote something bad and rewrite it for me but told me how to improve it myself. One thing that confused me was, I bought the single one for about £7 I think at first. It gave me an 89 score. Then I was indeed really impressed with it s I bought the 5 pack. But when I made the improvements that the 89 one advised, my score actually went down to a 78. I then worked on this advic, submitting my essay a following two times and got an 84. I just don’t understand how my score dramatically decreased even though I followed the majority of the advice. In addition, the ai checker was flagged on all my submission but I didn’t use ai at all for my writing. Also some of the advice, I felt was false, for example one said majority of successful computer science applicants have to have a Olympiad type thing whereas from my understanding and experience that isn’t the case, that it’s a must. But overall I was happy with the report.

It has significantly boosted my confidence when writing my personal statement. At first, I was very skeptical about what I actually wanted to write. But using this really helped me be sure of what I needed to write and where my strong areas for improvement are. It pushed my personal statement from a 58 to a 90 out of 100, which I am truly happy about.

Very helpful in developing my personal statement.

Statementory provides some useful insight into feedback for the personal statement but you have to be critical with what you decide to take on board as many of the suggestions given wouldn’t have actually contributed to the quality of my statement but instead made it feel more dense. It does review sentences that are too cliche or not contributing much well.

Amazing review of my personal statement. I was really unsure and not confident about my ps but Statementory gave a detailed report going through all the content and word choice. It even gave me super-curricular advice which was amazing.